WHAT YOU GET
Two passes. Done right.
- Full read of your existing script, up to 5 pages.
- One complete punch-up pass: sharper jokes, tighter lines, fat trimmed, porpoises poached (I made that one up).
- A 15-minute table-read call: I read it back to you out loud, the way we'd do it in a writers' room, so you hear what lands before you're on stage.
- One revision round after you review.
- Delivered as a clean, tracked-changes doc with page-by-page delivery notes — where to pause, where the laugh lands, which item of clothing to remove and when (optional) (discouraged).